The other ones are right. There should be more comments, extolling this wonderful story. I must admit, the first time I read this I hadn't commented - time constraints and all, but when I came back here today to reread it, I just had to let you know how much I love this story.
Bones' fear and pain are palpable. You did a fantastic job of getting the reader to feel those emotions right along with him. I was on the edge of my seat throughout the treatment, and I still had a similar reaction even when I read it a second time.
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Date: 2010-01-03 03:44 am (UTC)Bones' fear and pain are palpable. You did a fantastic job of getting the reader to feel those emotions right along with him. I was on the edge of my seat throughout the treatment, and I still had a similar reaction even when I read it a second time.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
"T"