Oh my, this was ... pretty. The characterization was exquisite and there were so many lines that just made me go 'oooh, I liked that' that I honestly can't pick just one to showcase. Your Pike was so beautifully broken and Kirk. Haha, he's such a grinning little schoolboy (but the whole not wanting to feel guilty thing, yeah, that's pretty Jim).
Mm. Liked this, most definitely. It was just so gorgeous and subtle and awesome. Go you. ♥
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Date: 2009-06-03 03:01 pm (UTC)Mm. Liked this, most definitely. It was just so gorgeous and subtle and awesome. Go you. ♥